Comments : Friends: Part II-"School"

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h hun a beautiful dedicati0n. great j0b 0n this darl. such a heartfelt piece. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Omg Anna i'm sure these people love you just as much as you love them- maybe even more.

    I'm sorry for being who I am,
    For it's my fault I know.
    That I'm so unbearable,
    My face I should never show.

    Your an amazing person and you should never be sorry for being yourself. never. and its not your fault. don't ever think that way about yourself. you are loved by so many people. not just the people in this poem but also the people on this site. i think its so great that you wrote this poem for your friends. i like it. and you are always loved - remember that. lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw, i bet your friends love yooh very much, you should show them this poem if you already havent its so pretty, im proud of ya and i bet they are tooh hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Another good one, same thing yeah, but good again, 5/5 ill give ya that, really sad endings on these im sorry you lose people i know what thats like i think everybody does in some way or another, great job girly girl keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Wow, I am blown away by every single one of your poems. They are truly flawless! Everything about you and your poetry is amazing. You are really a great person, Anna, and please don't change. And thank you for being my friend.

    More about the poem-- amazing, very emotional. Five out of five, if not more. Well, what else can I say when a poem is perfect?

    Matt

    P.S. My birthday is tomorrow! 13 years old!

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Beautiful poem, ur friendships sound very special xxxx