... Wow... nice. 5/5 You are really talented. And like TheRavensGhost said, I'd like to know who inspired it. If you don't mind telling me of course.

Anyway, keep your head up, and I hope to talk to you soon.

Wow thats really well written. I feel like there's someone in my head controlling me so I can relate to this poem a lot. I really love it. 5/5 definately!!! keep up the good work and read some of my poems if u ever have time.
-Sami

I really like this one, you rhyme the way i rhyme, i always like that in poems, but again very well written.

Excellent poem!! ur a great poet keep up the awesome work!
luv Fallen xoxo