Oh My Gosh! Your words, from a mother's point of view... wow, I'm so speechless right now. I really loved ur poem. Plz tell me if its true??? I think that it is, because it sounds like it came from the heart, and if it did, I'm relaly happy that you were there for your kids, and that you continue to be every day. Your poem was absoulutly beautiful, and so well written. Great Great Job! I will continue to read more of yours, I started to a while back but haven't gotten around to it. I'm sure I will make time now. I lvoe ur work...

Check out mind plz? and tell me if this poem is true or not?

Awww Vito thanks mate....your great hehe.......and yeah its a fictional poem i just captured it from experiences from other people that are close to me and wrot from a mother's point of view and i think i did okay.........and writing is my life i could'nt get as much joy out of anything else as i do in writing......thanks everyone for your comments they are greatly appreciated.

all i can say is that it's a great poem
keep it up
i think your a great writer can u plz look at some of mines and tell me if i have a chance

hey great poem!! I really liked it how you could put ur self in that place was so amazing this mite just be my favorite and Im definatly a fan!!!

ohhhh these are very nice!!! Keep em coming. :-)

Thanks everyone for your comments they are really putting a smile on my face.

v.v.good i'm only young but i new that was good.keep it up your kool i wish my mum loved me that way luvz yaz xoxoxkissesxoxoxox

wow that was amazing i loved it. the rythm was great and the message even better! you have a lot of talent looking forward to reading some more of your poems:)

Oh wow Jackie thank you so much for that comment it was beautiful.

and wow i cant believe im in the top five again lol this is my second poem inside a week im ........speechless hehe.thanks everyone.

hey lisa i loved this poem, one of the best i have ever read and im not just saying that! brought tears to my eyesx

Your poem hasn't got a full 5/5 from all the votes which is surprising. I thought it was well written and equally well thought out. Got my 5 anyway, K