I'm not the best judge of poetry... I like this poem a lot, meaning is quite strong, though a bit jagged in its wording. You seem like a very sad girl. and I stick with saying you need a good friend more then you need a partner (aka boyfriend)

I'm not the best judge of poetry... I like this poem a lot, meaning is quite strong, though a bit jagged in its wording. You seem like a very sad girl. and I stick with saying you need a good friend more then you need a partner (aka boyfriend)

Very strong.
I liked the way you phrased it, like trying to die, and I'm already dead sort of poetry, I like that!

Good Writing!
beth

Wow, i loved it! excellent poem, 5/5. it had lots of emotion in it. keep up the good work.
**lisa**

Great poem. its written extremly well and is full of emotion

Wonderfully written. Full of powerfull imagery and strong emotion. gret piece