Comments : Sad faces dont make you happy

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    :(
    awww lovely poem, but really sad. i love the way you relate to the swimming..... hehe..... anyway take care
    Polly xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    Amazing, love the way it's written. I have felt as though I was drowning in a sea of choas and can soooo relate! Keep it up!

    Naima