Great job. this piece is so moribdly beautiful.

i epsecially liked the lines:
"My pale lips stitched together, without a say.
And my eyes wide open to view the ending of the banished day....
†As I`m buried alive in my grave...† "

And also:
"And to the memories within my room,
caused my insanity to bloom.
Into a black rose, that has withered away into the darkness of the new moon"

All round great flow, clever word play and brilliant piece. very well done.