Hey, you seem really talented in writing. I liked the second stanza
the most. keep it up.
marjan

Very rhymy! And very good :D

Dave i was blown away by this poem, i have recently split with a loved one and this touched my heart. im so glad that there is someone who i can share this kind of moment with. please keep writing. god bless

This poem hit a nerve with me, it was pure brilliance.
I really liked it!
You have talent!
I feel privileged that i recieved a comment from you!
Thankyou and 5/5 for a fab poem!
*Gem*

Very good david

AWWW i really liked this ur pretty good for a guy well keep up the good work and thanks for ur comment dont be a stranger 5/5 always
kate

AWW THIS ONE WAS CUTE! =]
SOMETHIN EVERY TEEN PRETTY MUCH GOES THRU. UNDERSTANDABLE...GREAT JOB

♥KATIE