Comments : Teen Dreams

  • 15 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, you seem really talented in writing. I liked the second stanza
    the most. keep it up.
    marjan

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany Stone

    Very rhymy! And very good :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Lewis

    Dave i was blown away by this poem, i have recently split with a loved one and this touched my heart. im so glad that there is someone who i can share this kind of moment with. please keep writing. god bless

  • 14 years ago

    by Gem

    This poem hit a nerve with me, it was pure brilliance.
    I really liked it!
    You have talent!
    I feel privileged that i recieved a comment from you!
    Thankyou and 5/5 for a fab poem!
    *Gem*

  • 14 years ago

    by Sar

    Very good david

  • 14 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    AWWW i really liked this ur pretty good for a guy well keep up the good work and thanks for ur comment dont be a stranger 5/5 always
    kate

  • 13 years ago

    by KATIE

    AWW THIS ONE WAS CUTE! =]
    SOMETHIN EVERY TEEN PRETTY MUCH GOES THRU. UNDERSTANDABLE...GREAT JOB

    ♥KATIE