Wow... thats a lot of emotion, really powerful dark stuff, good writing keep it up x stabs x

Thats how i feel sometimes when i get put down!!

Great poem. very well written

Woh great poem! v.well written, well done
Polly

Wow...thats powerful......i read it like thrice....whatever that word is.....i like it...5/5 for you and that very good poem.....=) BRAVO!!(=