I like it so much.
One thing I have to say though, the little inscripts you put at the top kind of made me lose interest in reading the poem.
Anywyas, other than that very good job. Keep up the good work.

Hmm..good point. i'll switch it to the bottom, then.

I've always been intrigued by poems like these, and I'm narrowly keeping back my jealousy at the fact that you've made it so that it makes complete sense and is really fun to read. I like it so much, it distracts me from making hopeless lit program comments...GAH!! Ms. Lenny, this is a heckuva poem!

About your question...well, you see, I had a random inspiration the other day for a medieval-like chant/song thing, and I got the music down as soon as I could before forgetting it. It's for four vocal parts-- a soprano, an alto, a tenor, and a bass...and I randomly decided that I wanted to write the lyrics...welcome to my life.

Wow. *Impressed*.

Both this and your featured poem above are amazing. And I really do mean amazing.

I loved this poem!! I'm not sure if it's just the poem or if you're name had anything to do with it....j/k, the poem was fabulous (but i really do love the erratic hippie thing)

-Alli

ZOMG i love this one.
grah. so so soso good.
i know that expressing that is not helpful if i am trying to be critiful, but omg so good :D
(ps: i know critiful isn't a word :P)

OMGOSH.you are a genius, lena my 'ena. my lovely lovely genius.you are a genius poet.this is beauty right here!1