Comments : Sandcastles

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Elena!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing! Omgish! lol So Aidyn gave you the site! w00t lol -if your wondering this is Jenn, From all those years ago at cent.-lol -hugs- Welcome to the site hunny! Oh i wish you had joined donner, I just detetled like EVERYthing -cries- but oh well have a Happy christmas and Ill see you in the new year Hunny

    Much Love
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Aidyn

    Hey, Ms. Elena! Wow--that was fast--you're all set up and everything! Anyways, I love this poem so far--just to irritate you, I'm gonna jokingly say "figures--you're a lit student!!" but don't bother taking me seriously. Anyways, I love imagery you've put into this, as well as some cool references. I liked the "seashells by the seashore" line especially. Can't wait to read the rest!

    Saluti!

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This AMAZING. I like it so much create more poems asap. This is great, you are a great poet.

    Continue to make poems.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by perkyshadowgirl

    Wow...
    that's (for lack of better word) deeeeeeep.
    i really like this one :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    I love the imagery in this

    jemma