Hey, i really like the idea behind it, its a great idea. but i think you could have..expanded on it a little, made it longer and all that. but good work.
Ben

I enjoyed this poem, I know how it feels to feel that way. I liked the ending a lot. Good work.

Very good poem

Wow.. i loved the last stanza.. it was short yet beautiful.. very well written...

much love,
ipsita