Yeah i think you have it in the right section because it's more about how to deal with rejection or heartbreak or making a mistake rather then love or anything, but yeah this is great again im putting you on my favorites : ) 3rd stanza was a little rough to read but other then that perfect again i love your style 5/5

Good job

Great poem, i like the comparision between horse riding and rejection, very imaginative.

Wow the horse riding also relates to when your in a relationship

Yes, a bit confusing at first but I think I understood it, and I loved the metaphor...that was so original. Just a great poem..Although I think I would have put it in lost love or something like that, but nice one again!
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