I love the way you write.... neways wutsup?

Youve got the right idea and i like your style ut i think u need to try a littl harder to choose the right words so ur mesage is more powerful and easy to read

I liked the poem, it was very nice .
But I also agree with Bleeding Mascara . You are very talented, you
just need to choose the right words and add a little more emotion . But other then that I loved the poem and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work .

Keep up the good work
Letty