Comments : Things Need To Change Dad

  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    This is awsome. I think that you have gotten more ' out ' you know. I saw my dad today too. Probably not the same day here. But same resemblence. I really like your poems. They have so much pain, and emotion in it. I bet if you were to write as MUCH as you felt, you'd be a multi-millionare in writing. But really, their awsome...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PrincessCatalina

    Wow thats really deep, poetry is a good way to get everything out, keep up the good work! xoxo Catalina

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Omg. That was so touching! If you ever need to talk..I am here. Great Poem. 5/5 all the way!

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    It's really well written just like all of your other poems. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Hang in there and if you ever need anyone I'm always here. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Berry

    Awesome poems
    love it
    keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    SPITFIRE>>> I just want to say thanks for all the compliments on my poems... I really hope you go something from them.. you ar a great writter keep up the good work:)
    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thx for r/c on my poem! I gotta read more of ur work, I know ive read better poems by you this one was good, not all that dark as i thought it was gonna be , but definatly a good write hun! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby Dont Be Scared

    I really like this poem and i know how you feel. thanks for the comment on my poem. i really like this i give u a 5!!! lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    If you've ever read my poem "Where are you Daddy?", which I think you have, you'll see that I feel the same way. Great job with the flow, you didn't ryhme your words or anything, and that's a true poet.
    5/5