Comments : Beauty lies within

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    An inspiring message and very well written poem, the flow and rhyme are both flawless, i tried to pick out my favourite stanza but they're all excellent!!

    a tiny improvement to this poem would be to change the rhytmn at the end to make the meassage stand out more eg
    'they're not all judging you so remember,
    beauty lies within'

    good luck in my contest! xx

  • This is a really good poem, with a nessecary message, be yourself