U couldve developed ur poem a bit more so we can understand what u r going through..but it's true..what the voice can hide, the eyes show..and only a sensitive person can notice that and maybe help u through whatever u r going thru... good luck..take care!!

You have a way with words, I love the way you have said so much in a few words. I think this is a great talent to have.
I also wanted to say that I really like all of your quotes, and also thank you for commenting on my poem.
Best Wishes
*VioletRaven*