Wow, deep and dark and sad. lots of despair in this one. so sad.... alot of very good word play, reflecting the concept beautifuly (yet morbidly) well. (lines such as...):

"My ears are bleeding from the screams that continue to linger in this hell I call home...."

"Can`t replace the stitches used to keep my dreams from falling,..."

sad write, but well writen. good job...and take care.

That was very deep it sounded alot like my life, it sounded like some one who is confused and unsure of who they are or at least if its ok to be. it is a very good read