Wow...im really sorry and i hope things get better. great poem tho 5/5!!

This poem was excellent.Bye.

Made me cry.... I think I have done enough cryin over the holidays..... 5/5 AGAIN

This is a great memior poem good job cant wait to see whats next

Very good

Wow im sure denise is smiling down on you...its the most beautiful tribute ive ever read
keep up the good work hun...

Awwww hunny such a nice poem. really flows from the heart i really liek this as it has a great meaning and is such a lovely thing to do. keep writing loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxx

Brilliant poem, very wel writen. this person obviosly ment a lot to you, wonderfully written and expressed peice

Hey nice poem. i find it easy to write poems that are meaningfull and true and i felt that this poem was as i was based upon something real, not something made up even though writting about it brings up old memories. kirstie.

This is a excellent poem. It captures your emotion, and it flows more easiliy then other poems that rhyme. Keep it up!