Hi There!!
I honestly hv given this one "4", though i liked the poem but then in between it lost the flow.
While u r writing a poem, the feelings u r going thro and the way u r reading it after writing is totally different from how readers will feel and read...& thats where it makes the difference...i think i made sense.

well overall it was very unique....& i sincerely loved this part

i told myself i hated him,
but i beat him up just to touch him,
i yelled at him just to hear his voice...
i threw any chances we had together away,
and i didnt think i cared,
but i do...
and ill say these words to you,
if its the last thing i do...
"garrett, I love You"

take care and all the best forever

You know i say that all the time!!! lol no lie. thats why i read all my poems like 1000 different ways over and over. lol. well thank u verry much for commenting!!

MucH LovE TffanI

I love the poem its so passionate! i wish i had a love like that for someone one thing: some bits dont flow too well but its expressing how you feel so it really doesnt matter but keep goin I LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Thank you!