Sorry for the typo i ment 'clung' not 'gung'......comments please

I think it's very beautiful! I love it!
5/5
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Hey I liked this poem a lot, awesome job and thanx for the comment. 5/5

Hey I liked this poem a lot, awesome job and thanx for the comment. 5/5

Hey I liked this poem a lot, awesome job and thanx for the comment. 5/5

Hey I liked this poem a lot, awesome job and thanx for the comment. 5/5

Good work,keep it up,
ahmad

Another awesome rhyming poem. You have a great collection!!