Well put Juls, the imagery that went through this is flawless. Im proud of yeh -hugs- Loveeeed it

Jenn

Tis a really good n descriptive poem n describes me in someways too...it was really good keep it up
becca x

OMG! That was really good. I felt the pain for a minute there. Rachael sayz she luvs it too. Keep writing more. Luv ya buddy. See ya in the chat room lata.

So sad I had 2 hold back my tiars but good work

Foxy

This poem is scary...sad...but it is wonderful...

As tony the tiger would say, its greeeaaaaaattttt!

Ello Julie!!! Awsome poem. Remember I am always here for you.

Love always,
~Joe~

Thanks for the comment, much appreciated :)
I love your work, keep it up
Take care xx

Very good poem! So sad though... I know You feel :(

Wow hun.
I know exactly how you feel.. from the shower to faking hapiness =\
you did a good job on this!

Love,Lisa xD

That was a great poem. i really like the last lines. i just enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.

Emma5/5

This is very good, I can relate alot to this. I love how you ended it, it gives a great tone. Good job. I really like it.

That was so sad but it was a really good poem... keep it up

Wow that was amazing

Aw it was so sad
But so good. :)

Wow, deep. draws some raw emotion.