Aww this poem was beautiful...i loved it so much. It had so much emotion and pain in it...tears came at the corners of my eyes. This was magnificent!!!
My fave part was

The paper was stated : Xs and Os
and signed by your Daughters Soon-to-be Ghost

For some reason i could really identify with that (that scared me lol) and it just kept echoing in my head!!! I also love reading ur quotes...they rock

Keep ur head up and smile, luv jess xoxo

Good poem i can connect with it a lot. all of your poems are good! 5/5
lauren

I LIKED UR POEM A LOT& I LIKED WHAT U WROTE IN UR PROFILE,U EXPRESSED SOMETHING WHICH I WNTD 2 SAY IT B4..

WOW, UMMM, NOT MUCH i CAN PiCK AT ABOUT THiS POEM! iT WAS WONDERFULLY WRiTTEN AND FULL OF EMOTiON! i MEAN iT REALLY HAD AN EFFECT, LiKE iT REALLY SHOWED HOW SOME GiRLS FEEL! GREAT JOB && CHECK MiNE OU iF YOU WANT!

*GiRL iN LOVE