0h a heartfelt piece. very t0uching beautifully w0rded. keep up the great w0rk

Wow, that was great. u can tell it came form the heart. keep it up.

I really, really love it and i'm quite jealous of your ability to express exactly whats on your mind. I don't know how to describe my feelings right now but know that your loved.

A well written poem. I really like the ending. It seems so sad, but out of love. Very nice touch. Keep writing.

Well written!... i love the way u express things....love this poem..and keep on writing

It's very pretty.

Perfect beauty doesn't last
quiet shadow long since past
ended true to what i thought
your lies mislead from what i sought
perfect bliss these lies you wrote
there was hope for future in this note
i now know that feelings die
love abandoned, alone to cry
so long now that i dont care
just reminders of what we shared
such emotions your words could send
tragidy to watch it end