There were a few grammatical errors but the subject of friendship is always a very nice one...good job.

//Truest Lies//

Amazing job. i really liked this poem alot knowing that she has a friend like you to tell her problems. I'm glad she does and i hope she reads this because this is an amazing piece of work. You are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

"I can tell when your down"...your should be you're. Anyway, I don't usually enjoy rhyming poems, although you portrayed your message quite clearly. I like what you had to say...it reminded me of my best friend (not including the wife part), and I think it's important that I can connect with the poems I read. Good job.

Lucy Loves Not