Comments : Help!

  • 18 years ago

    by Paula

    Omg kelsey, it it so emotional and the way you repeat that you are battered and bruised really gets the point across that you are not only physically hurt but emotionally scared by this, great way of getting your point across, keep up al the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    That gave me the chills that is soo GOOD....

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissy

    Thats sad but a good poem. it lets me know that im not the only one. good job i like. maybe u should continue bout wat happened if u havent already. 5/5