Comments : Silver Slumbers

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    So... sleepy... :)

    well done...dark, enchanting and mysterious.

    LOL,
    Rainy

    Now to work on ur poem I will dedicate to you ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Starting saturday... since today the java wont work lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I ran out a long time ago of good things to say about you. You reek of talent. I absolutely love everything you write! I especially like this one because it's a style I like, it's more about flow then rhyme scheme. Great job as always!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Im stunned. This is awesome; perfect flow, perfect word choice. Keep it up. happy new year XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Wonderful.. and so sad. Great writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I was actually pretty emotional before reading this poem. I just clicked this poem of yours, I was holding back tears, till I read

    fill up your tired and worn eyes
    with tears you've been waiting to cry
    no more holding back its time.

    And I just couldn't hold it back anymore, I just cried and cried and read and read. This poem really touched me. I won't forget this poem. And how it made me feel. It touched me. Very beautiful. It's amazing. Thank you, for sharing this with us.

    -xxx-

    By the way, I loved that picture of that howling wolf in your profile. I love wolfs, it's an amazing pic.