This was really great. read and rate some of mine if you like. keep up the good work.

AWESOME poem...

That was good baby!! I love you

Great poem that was really expressive and the flow was successful. Keep writing..and i must say your comment, although had me in shock, was so true. Take care of urself
xxx

I don't really know you, but i came across some of your poems by accident, there's this guy I really like, and his name is Cody too... Well anyways, I read a few of your poems and really liked em, so now ur on my favorites, KEEP IT UP! Nice poems...

Codyyyyyyy =)

Lol I must say well done. This is a wonderful way to start off your poetry identity on here, how ever, the change in stlyes is a bit distracting,

What I mean is you go from a normal stanza to :

I feel my soul torn
....by your undying scorn

....and now I see the dark closing in
I feel myself torn apart from within

Wonderful lines, but they done fit... style wise with the rest of the poem. however in context the work beautifully.

I really enjoy you work and I hope to read more =) keep it up

Jenn

BRILLIANT! 5/5, and I'm putting you on my faves! :)
PV
P.S. I like to see the opposite of a stereotype! Oh! And welcome to the FISH BOWL CLUB! :D See ya!

I like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*~ not loved ~*~