I really like this poem. I think it's beautiful. In order to write a good free verse poem it has to someone flow well without depending on rhyme, and you did just that with this poem. Excellent job!

Tiffany.xox.

Nice job writing this! you did a wonderful job getting your feelings across and i think that this poem definelty deserves a 5/5... keep it up!

sammie

Hi Katrina, you had me guessing what this is poem is trying to say! The first stanza doesn't sound like a love poem at all and you had me frowning until the end when I finally realized.. Lol. A worthy read I must say. An expression of love in a very unique way. I like that. Very creative. Thanks for sharing! =)