This poem was okay..But I feel theres something missin in it.

That was so deep and beautiful

Thats really good i liked it!

Beautiful use of the english language... The line,
Another blames with fiery fault, was very cool.
You have a lot of talent for one so young. 5/5.

I luved it. nicely written. keep up the good work. also thank you for commenting on my poem.

Thats so beautiful, ur a great writer

Wonderfully great
it's quite a strong piece and i love the use of imagery you used.