WOW it was really good...and im sorry...but not that sorry cause at least u got a new perspective on things

That sux about ur jaw and all.but at least ur still alive and have a new perspective!live life to the fullest!!!!please comment on some of my poems

Its really good im glad ur okay well yeah hope to talk to ya soon hope u get better tC
marady

Wow. thats amazing. God works in mysterious ways, i've always heard he doesn't do 3rd chances. enjoy ur new outlook on life. NO MORE DRINKING AND DRIVING!! i still cant believe u lived through that....ur car was all jacked up. good luck to u, and i hope u heal up okay.

Yes i agree with the other ppl who commented.God does work in mysterious ways....Its a good thing your alive though because maybe you can help others and they will believe you about drinking and driving. Can I see the pics? My email is wildncrazychickypoo@yahoo.com..

Beautiful poem sorry to hear that you had to learn the hard way but atleast your alive today to share this and hopefully others can learn something from it. Beautiful! I'd like to see some pics too. Always, Jen

I loved this! it is so sad but beautiful...u r a great writter but the rhyme scheme is a little inconsistant....def keep up the good work! id appreciate it if u could comment on my poems.
andi

This is a really great poem!! send me pics if you don't mind! 5/5

Omg :"( i hope ur doin alright

It makes me miss the little things,
that some dont even notice,
like the sun coming up,
over the nice blue waters,

^ i love thatt... this poem shows people to apprectiate the little things in lifee,and that in an instant everything can change.. so many can relate, great work.. 5/5 from me

Wow...im really glad your okay that would have been really scary...great poem by the way : )

Great poem full of emotion and a great ending....glad you decided to change. it's sad when some continue on the same course.
Your best stanza in my opinion was this one...

you dont even know how quick it was,
u cant even imagine,
one second were joking,
the next we were crashing

Charisma*

It's a good thing you have written this down. I hope a lot op people your age ( and older!) read this. If one life is saved because of this, you can be damned proud of yourself!
I am glad you survived and I hope to read many more excellent poems by you.

Take care, son.

5/5 Ingrid

WOW!!
It is very very good!
I'm glad you are doing better.

That is so crazy. One minute you are just having fun, and the next you could have been gone. That is very scary huh?

Ya i know were you comeing from, i had a bad accident too. its kindas funny looking back at it, it was be a my now ex's first date that night and we was goin way to fast and we wern't wereing seat blets and we came around this corner and there was a parked truck in the middle of the road and the person had broken down and we hit it and smashed the front end up and then we filpped the jeep 2 times and landed on the back..now i have a scar that runs down my back and one on my neck! srry so long

Im glad you learned from that and hope only the best for you you are a wonderful writer