Wow this is good. I loved it. It's short but powerful. Beautiful written. I really loved it. Keep it up =) You are talented! -xxx- Lotsa love, and also a happy new year

Cute...that's cool...no comment...that's all...

That's really meaningful. Wow! It really made me think. Great Job

All the Best
Sondos

Great poem

Another beautiful piece!!!!
you're amazing. I luved ur poetry. there r so much of talented poets here. good luck with the comings!!!
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x00x0xx

Exellent poem i luved it thanks for comenting on mine. i really do think your talented keep it up
take care

Oh wow, short but powerful, the structure of the poem is so well done and it flows wonderfully, it is so sad though... keep up the writing and thanks for your comments they meant so much x

This short...but it's also a good write...thank you for posting.