Awsome poem, i copyied it i hope u dnt mind, u can check out my myspaceit will be in a blog
http://blog.myspace.com/eternal_nite
http://www.myspace.com/eternal_nite

I like you're style

Great poem, 5/5
xoxo

Really good luved it.

It is a good poem, though i would like it to be how angels live and not die cuz my name is angel so it sort of scares me, lol. Good job.

Very good poem. really nice flow.