Comments : A question

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    You are good at etting your feelings down into words. (unlike that sentance lol)

    very well expressed peice

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    I can really relate to this poem great write. O and you only commented two of my poems.. Could you please go check out Lucky to be with you.. Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I think it being short helped to make the point
    I can relate to this with friends in a way
    The use of lots od questions showed desperation
    Keep writing =]