Wow!!
i really loved this poem...its something anyone cud relate to...so nicely u hv xpressed such a general situation which comes in everybody's life...very nicely written dear
5/5

This is a fantastic poem,,, its like my favorite,, well i have many but its good!!! i think u will like my poems too, go check them out and pls comment,, thx
**doz an1c me?**

Wow, this is really good. It's flow and the narration is excellent. I hope it worked out?

Your poems are excellent. 5/5 as always!!
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