Hi nitin,
asusual u r superb.well i liked it as itis a bit far from ur dark poems. but ur dark poems r also as good as this one.
i just loved it. great job.
and thanx 4 ur comments. u always encourage me to do better. i hope i can do it well also.
take care, bharti

Ok Nitin, I see where this is coming from... But, great poem... I hope things work out... You should definitely give it a try...
Very deep and thoughtful...
Just a question: Have you ever given these poems to her? If not, then you should give this one...
5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Woah I love this poem and I can soo relate to it...all of u poems are amazing keep up the good work..and maybe this year..things wi better 4 u..i hope they do..xxx

Hello Nitin ,

Great poem ,yes its better to give ones relationship a second chance rather than say goodbye and regret whole life.
very well written.

Best regards
chavii,

Aww how sweet!! i love it!!
all the best for you this year nitin, i know you deserve it.
Im sorry we've lost touch a bit...i promise to stay in touch more=)
take care
love,
>torn -x.x.x-

Very thoughtful and very heartfelt poem. You see, you did know how to be positive before me. lol... Keep that attitude forever. Loved the poem.

Love
Michelle

Nitin
What a beautiful poem. I love the hope that is in this piece. Imagery is wonderful.

let's burn each other with that touch
before this year passes by
as time will never stop for anyone
so let's give it a try

These lines just touch the heart. How could this not move someone.
Love Cindy

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3