This is a new one that truly came from the heart. Just let me knoe what you think--good or bad.

Very good!!I'm impressed it kinda made me think..

Wow, it's amazing and so sad! Very good!
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Poet that was beautiful. sounds like you lost a beautiful soul but that piece of poetry was stunning. I think the best writing comes out of what we go through don't you? it gave me goosebumps. *hugs* great job! 5/5 from me

I couldnt give it less than a 5 - truly touching - may i ask what happened? I am really sorry for the lost

Beautiful. gorgeous. i loved it! **5/5**

Very Beautiful, it's hard to lose someone that you care so mych about. I lost a cousin to murder 3 years ago and Jan. 16th. So i'm still dealing with it. I loved your poem. Keep writing.