Nice job, very deep and love the flow keep it up 5.5

Hey thats our baby...flying high in this site..:o)

wow!! its really a great feeling to see this poem being posted.

i liked the way u furnished this one in best possible manner..its really looking good.

what else can i say...it seems i hv read this poem before..:o))

well thnx for ur lovely comment..as u r the only one who could understand from where that poem really came...well i hv tried to share my poems but no initiative has been taken ever...so i hv stopped trying.

well...nice poem once again...all the best

Such a sweet beautiful poem , good job both of you.

chavii.