I rly like this poem, i wish i had as much will power 2 boys as ur poem shows lol but im prob more stupid thn u.
anyway gr8 poem, nice job!

x Rach x
check mine out if ya want x

"I've had nothing but pain since you left
But you don't even care
You left me battered, bruised, and broken
Were you ever really there?"

i luved this line! and great poem 5/5
thx 4 the comment