Nice job i am sorry to hear you feel so down, keep your head up 5.5

Well done hun, Its a great poem, chin up tho its an experience to remember and learn from

Much love Jenn

Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

This is really good. The poem flows so well and its bad that you feel so upset. But at least we know that when something bad happens you can write an amazing poem out of it.

Wow, I can really relate to it! Great job!!!

As always so beautiful

Ahh this is soo saad...i hope this is not true and if it is.. am sorry juzt keep ur head up ,very good writling 5/5