Thats really good!!

Keep on writing from your heart... the more you do the more you'll find that the words will begin to write themselves. Your young but you have serious potential... just write from the heart and you'll get better everyday!

Take care,
Richard

You are a great writer!

Thats a heapz good poem!!

That is such a great poem keep up with the good work

Beautiful poem, you write very well. thanx for the comment.

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