Oh this is just wonderful! Amazing... Greatly written! How you long for someone, wanting to be with them. You've captured this emotion well!

Wonderfully written. Beautiful poem.

Hell0 darl! amazing j0b with this piece. such a sweet p0em. beautifully written. t0uching lines. keep up the amazing w0rk darl!! =)

l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
d0ra

Gesselle,

Beautifully wriiten dear heart. Though your distance with your loved one may be vast now, one day it may not be a problem and he may not be so far away. Dreams and hope will always survive.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Ohhhh how sweet, beautiful and lovely piece....

Great poem this iz very good keep up tha good work

W00t, this is tres bein mon petite amie! keep it up and always always inspire,

Love yeh oodles
Jenn

Great write. I can feel the emotion in your words. Love is a wonderful thing. It can heal, as well as hurt.

This was very cute, 5/5. ;D

heidi

Beautiful Beautiful write Geselle! WOW....I feel this way about all the members of CC&P...I wish I could be there with all of you but since I cant my words can....your an amazing writer...glad you joined the group cause I can read your amazing writes!