Hey, that was fantastic. I enjoyed the meaning and the way you wrote it.
keep it up.
take care,
marjan

Skillfully written.
With Deeper Meaning that what the poem protrudes...

Keep it up...

I don't know if you're a Christian, but that toatly rocked because it showed how, in a Christian perspective, this world is not our home ( I forgot the reference, but it's in the New Testement somewhere). We have a better place and I can't wait to get there. i loved it. 5/5.