My mom drinks alot so i know how it feels. please hunnie be strong

Again description is the key. I would have used another word besides hissfits. but good poem none the less

Please give us some more. Add something please.
It's great

I hope he stops soon..cause it doesnt help..he needs to get help and i pray he does quick.

I love this,if i could id give it 2 my dad cuz he never stops drinking but he'd probably smack me if i did.well love u alot!love,faerie

So powerfully worded....good write!

Your poem really hit poem. it was really good. my dads an alcoholic so i know how it feels. not knowing what to say or where to turn when someones in that state of mind being drunk. its pretty shitty but whatever. keep it up
Dee

This is really good.. and I love you like a sis too!!!

~4ever-n-ever~

Kool. keep it up. what did u DO wen he was drunk, eh?

Awww sweetie i wish he would stop u know i am here for you always have and allways will.
Love Ya Strugglingxoxo

Aww. i loved this one. i can relate wayy too much! Hang in there hun.

Tara

I am sorry you have to feel that way but this is really good

Ok, its a nice poem but i hthink more description wouldve been great! i know how it feels bby the wya...you arent alone. :) keep smiling

Great poem. Keep up the good work.5/5
Please return the favor

I can also ralate to this poem, its very similar to the pain i feel, 5/5 xxtake carexx

I think this piece shows true emotion. I would read it outloud, i feel you might have some spelling errors

Another great poem.
But you can be strong
Don't give up

That is a great poem. very emotional and shows true feeling. i can relate to you on that subject. take care!

This poem is tru but great. It has very strong emotions..keep up the great work

I feelz ya...powerful peom 5/5 wow! Lol