Comments : The Reality

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey wow this is a gr8 poem, i no xactly how you feel n u really portrayed it well, 5/5
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by Vic

    Maybe... we both should stop eating ice cream while we cry at night... LOL just kidding levina. ^_^ you know you're beautiful inside and that's all that matters. believe me. i'm your brother's brother... lol. and very good poem... you described practically the whole world in just a short poem. it's so awesome! but don't hate yourself. because in reality... physical appearance can't compare to what's in your heart. and you're a nice person. ^_^ i wouldn't want you to change one bit. so yeah. keep ya head up, payyce.