Good peom... I like the way you rhymned things. I leaves a lot up to the reader to interpret

Sweetness 5/5 your really good

Wow hun this poem is really good i love it. i know what you mean and i liked the ending, the beginning of the end. i think that is like my fave line lol.keep up the good work

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Yea i no lol
well its ok i love comments on my poems
and this is really good
you must have alot of inspiration