Omg!! *insert awe face here..(jaw dropped and all)*
wow matt...u blow me away every single time with ur poetic stories...yet they're mor ethan that..i just..wow.
lol..sorry for not making much sense..but im kinda in awe.
take care..i hope everything with you is good..
what's ur new years resolution?
luv,
>torn (but to u..anna..cos u're special:P) -x.x.x-

Wow wow wow...wow!!lol these are so amazing! there was like a suspense in this one, i cant wait 4 the rest! great work! xxxxx

Wow Matt this is amazing, i really cant wait to read the next to i am truly exctied. Your poems just are so amazing i wish i had your extensive amount of talent.

Thank you for your comments on "Knife to wrist, Bee to flower" Yes i do know that it is horrible and i hate it for what it is and what it does to me. But at the same time i love it and can't stop. I would truly like to be able to stop but it is so ungodly hard to be quite honest. It is just so hard. But thank you sooo much for your concern. But in the end I will be alright, one way or the other, Because i am always alright in the end.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

YESSS ANOTHERR PART WOOOOOOO.
wow matt your words seriously blow me away, ive never in my life read such exquisite poetry and words, you're one of a kind my dear dont ever change your poems can change the world i TELL yaaa

Its nice

I love this. its very descriptive and takes you right in.

Dont worry.. people always do that too the good poems... I hate them.. its all of the people who are jealous.. a few are sincere. Anywayz, tantalizing poem an absolutely mind-blowing image. Great vocabulary. Flow and rhythm were jaw-dropping. If not for my temporary petition of the rating system, i'd definately rate this one of the greatest 5/5's I've read. Congrats looking forward to selling the next parts as well.

MATTTT YOU HAVNT COMMENTED ON MY NEW POEM! its one of my best :-) guess i dnt suck after all :-p

Who rated it as a 1? are they blind? It's called drowning part V for a reason!
It's incredible I want the next 2!

Your poems are extraordinarily cOol... n' nice rhyming technique!! hop ya can continue to write poems..CYa

Keep on with the pomes there good and for that a** well he just needs to drop dead.

5/5 of chours for this creative poem/story. I like how you make pomes in to storys I have been wanting to do somthing like it but I havent been able to think of anything