Ah so i see that there's a part two = ) this is really an amazing piece of work and i'm really like the non-rhyming scheme!!! My fave stanza-

Because those are the memories
i will always hold close to my heart
The memories i will never forget
the memories that reflect in my eye

I don't know why but this part just spoke out to me and the words flowed sooo well together!!! This girl is lucky to have you!!
Keep it up!!!
luv jess xoxo

Hey hun this poem is probably a little better than the first one.. You did an amazing job and for being only 14 your a great writer!!!! I wish I could write long poems like you mine are pretty much short and simple but thank you so much for your comments it means so much!!! Ttyl let me know when you have new poems or better yet I will add you in my favorites.. Keep writing

Just as great as the first one! i still love the unrhyming scheme and i think it was perfect for this poem... great job!!...
~Sandra~