Great poem. keep it up
polly

Hey Katie!
I actually quite liked the poem, especially the lines:
The thirst-quenching success seemed so feign.
As did everything else up-to-the-minute of fame.

Nice.
Keep it up!
Laterz,
Shirlz.

Not bad. The style was a bit edgy and it had a bit of a disrupped flow and meter with some words i didn't even know existed :P. Well it gave me a break from the standard poem styles which is refreshing but try to make it flow a little better.

I like the effective words in this poem a bit big for me lol but i liked it hun xxx jessi xxx

I like this alot very nice, xoxoxox Rach