I understand the topic and how you feel but i dont feel you put enough expression into it. Its a good poem but i dont see a deep loning into it its to short i would like to see more. be more descriptive. all and all good poem.

I rated it at a 5 never the less cuz it was at a 1 and i do not feel it is a 1 poem

Be strong hun, everything happens for a reason. Love ya lots. And great poem regardless!

I dont think the answer is KILLING URself but, be strong as Amber say...

Jammal

Aww...babygirl..i feel that way to sometimes..But let me tell u something thats not the answer..Ok..and i hope u the best..ur girl krisanta

I understand but I wont let you leave this earth

Look you selfish little primadonna, its called Life. EVERYONE feels this way at some point in their life and if they don't they can't be human. taking your own life is the easy road; it is taking the easy way out. I dare you to live. I dare you to put the effort in and make something of your life. I dare you. you think your life is miserable.. but look at the people around you who care about you.. what do you think your death would do to their lives. think about that.

Suicide...it's neva the way...i know...stay string xx and fuk erin!!

Actually i agree almost completely with erin. and any of u people start to give me this bullshit of u dont know, or its to hard. ok cause my life has been hell! im 18 and been through so much it could make your head spin. ive almost died at least 3 times. i have had a gun pointed at my head. i know what its like to think about suicide. but u never should actually try or cut yourself. thats just dumb. erin is right death is the easy way out, so live. take pride in the things u do. the hardest part about life is living. death is quick and sudden, easy. life is hard, requires effort, and perseverence. you only get one life, so live it.

Good poem but dont hurt yourself....and good work on not cuttting i know how hard it is

XoX ...2moroNEVAcame

Suicide is not the answer.I wish you didnt feel this way but know that i am here and i always will be.Im here.
Love Ya Shareedaxoxo