Comments : Ready for this world (No-one needs a daddy)

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    Oh My... Wow... Okay I dont actually knwo how else to describe it. It's sad but it's got a great beat and by the sound of it you got caught up in one of those moments where you couldnt stop writing. Hehe I get those but I that poem is one of the best I've ever read. It's just so powerful. I really love it. 5. I don't know if it's true if it is then I'm sorry. If you ever wanna chat my emails address is on my profile. Keep writing! Cause I'd love to read more fo your poems...
    Take Care, Elle xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    And believe it or not I can speel :S you just caught me in a moment... honest... x

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    ...*speel

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    ....*spell!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow what a wonderful poem. Yet very sad. You gave this poem your all, and it shows. A lot of feelings in this one. A lot of pain. It really flows. Well done girl! Well done. Lotsaa love -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Congrats. It was good.

  • Strong,cut very nice...keep ritting u have potential

  • 18 years ago

    by RetiCent

    Wow, very sad poem, I felt your pain you were going through while I read this, I hope someday i'll be talented enough to right a great work of art like this 5/5 hands down!

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Omg its amazing
    i know excatly what it is about
    i love it
    its amazing
    omg its so good
    i hope u keep writing like this
    cuz im adding u to my favs!!
    greatjob
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Siamko

    Really like your poem, it has so much feeling in it. Sad poems are the best kind